RE: FLASH: SITE CHECK _ www.tektraxx.com

[Susan Yoo]

Some constructive criticism. . .


+ Home Page - Those red boxes are obnoxiously glaring and ugly, particularly

the text inside them.  Everything seems fuzzy, including the graphics.  The

colors used for the text boxes and the text themselves makes it very

unreadable, especially the blue against the red.  My immediate reaction was

"Yuck".  (Sorry, if this sounds harsh.)


+ More on those red boxes. . .the formatting of the left box with the phone

number and email is odd.  Why a bullet for every line?  Again the colors

don't make the information stand out any more.  Rather, the opposite effect

for me because I want to look away.  Why do you have "Click The Graphic To

Enter" in the red box?  For good UI, you shouldn't need explicit directions.

You can add user feedback, like a cursor change on a rollover over the

graphic.  Then if you want to add a "Click to Enter", you could add it under

the graphic.  It would seem more appropriate there.

Right box, the blue text again, ugh.  Plus the font is pretty heinous and

not even anti-aliased.


+ Watch for TYPOS!

	Home Page: "Comming Soon" -- "Coming Soon"

	Entering the pre-site: "bellow" -- "below"


+ Clicking on "Enter..." the site without entering a name, you get the

dialogue box.  "Please write a Name or Handler- Tek TraxX"  Why "Handler"

and not just "Name"?  Delete "Handler".  It's unnecessary and may be

confusing to some people.  Why not "Thanks" instead "Tek TraxX"?


Sorry, but I didn't bother entering the site.  I didn't have enought

interest to bother entering my name and was annoyed that I had to.


I would have to agree with the others.  Hire a graphic designer.  One

shouldn't judge a book by it's cover, but realistically, people do..

.especially if one is hiring a production house to do it's design as well as

the programming.


--sueyoo


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