Re: FLASH: Animated flash film - your comments please ?

[Jefferis]

On Tue, 29 Feb 2000 22:51:07 +0100, Chris de Deugd <

ariaxs4all [dot] nl

> wrote:

 Really nice Ostrich motion... did you get that from a film and do an 

outline rendering?


A couple of places it moved too fast and I couldn't absorb the text.  


Also, and intro telling the viewer what they are about to see would help 

set the context... otherwise you're reading about 4 lines before you 

realize you are in a poem.


Jeff

>I am working on a small flash film that is based on a poem by Shelley,

>and I would like some reactions. It's not completely finished and

>there's no sound yet.

>Please fill me in on any flaws, whether it's too fast or too slow - if

>it's readable.

>

>Thanks,

>

>Chris

>

>http://www.xs4all.nl/~aria/pages/love.html



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