site check/suggestions?

[naoki + rebecca mitsuse]

Hello,



I recently finished my first Flash animation called Sex Slave Rebels,

and I am interested in any feedback or suggestions that you may have.

Especially on how I can polish the piece up.



http://www.geocities.com/SoHo/coffeehouse/2917

(scroll past Bobo the cat.)



Thanks!



naoki



P.s.  Sorry for that last piece of mail regarding sound effects.  I wasn't

thinking and

accidentally sent it off to the list.





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