Re: FLASH: site check (yet another)

[Nigel Randsley-Pena]

Edward,


Nothing like some poetry to finish off the day, thanks.


As for your work :

Dislikes 

- The rhythm you impose on the reader. I'm one of those strange guys

that likes to savour every morsel and hate being spoon fed, so I enjoyed

your poem only when I was able to get to the text version.

- Black background white text, black and white photo, then a coloured

photo. This is not the perception I get from the poem. Midnight blue,

heat, pression/oppression I would have gone along these lines.

Likes

- The fact that you created it and enjoyed doing so

- The fact that you kept it simple

- The choice of sounds


Nigel


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