Re: FLASH: Flash sites to see

[Kenneth C. Sherwood]

Daniel Hart wrote:


> Hi all,

>

> if you want to see my Flash work for pop groupos (unofficial) check out

> www.users.zetnet.co.uk/djh-graphics/flash and let me know what u think.


Thanks for sharing your work with us, Daniel!


I'll stick to the constructive criticism, and spare you and us any

ingratiatory fluff. :-)


There are seven beats to the sound loop on the Enter Massive Attack page. I

feel you should have a full eight beats, the last beat being silent. It

would sound much better then, especially as an endless loop.


Upon entering Massive Attack, Tracey Thorn's picture seems out of sync with

the others.


The loop on the Enter Soundlab page is almost a full eight beats, and could

get away with standing as it is. But why do you stop the loop after about

four repetitions? You let the Massive Attack one go on apparently

infinitely, and I liked that better.


That's as far as I've gotten.


I will be doing a site similar to yours by the end of the year. Thanks

again for sharing your example.


Sincerely,


Ken Sherwood



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