Re: FLASH: site cheCk-- your input needed! (XPOST)

[Morpheus]

Hi Diana,

 

 Morpheus here.

 

 diana jeon <

dianajflex [dot] com

> wrote :

 > Subject: FLASH: site cheCk-- your input needed!  (XPOST)

 > 

 > I would love to get some feedback on this site.  It is for a 

 > furniture  craftsperson in MD (I live in Honolulu).  The client 

 > wanted " clean simple  and elegant ".  Emphasis on **simple**.  It is 

 > still in the developmental process, however, the intro is conplete, 

 > as is most of one portion of the slide show.

 

 Surely the construction style is "clean, simple and elegant". You

 shows a good choice of colours, and the pics merge very well in

 the graphic context. What I fell slightly wrong is the animation

 *speed* : wouldn't it be better a little slower ? 

 In my opinion, there are just TOO many sites that rely on 

 speed of animation and chaotic-multiple-elements-bouncing on

 screen : sometimes less speed means also possibility of 

 understand better the messages. 

 This, maybe, can be applied at your site : it is a site that

 may suggest a sense of elegance, style, and cool design.

 

 > One loves it.  The other feels the quote is too pretentious and 

 femimine.

 

 I don't see anything too pretentious nor feminine.

 

 > (It is taken directly from the press release, go figure!)  

 

 Typical, alas 

 

 > to embarassed to tell anyone about his site if the photo looked like 

 > a photo of him.  

 

 Now, THIS is a bit feminine ;>

 

 > I need some feedback to decide how to proceed...right now, the into is

 > complete, and from there, if you click on the "desks and tables" a 

 > scroller will come up.  the two (of four) that have pix work.  (the 

 > client is fine with this part. )

 > any feedback, good, bad or indifferent, is greatly appreciated.  I am 

 > not sure how to proceed given the  varying feedback from the client, 

 > and it would be a big help to have some additioinal feedback to 

 > evaluate and

 

 My humble advices :

 

 1)slow down intro

 2)increase a bit the size of fonts

 3)fix the pics-navigator bug and slow down it 

 

 Very nice work, aside this minor poin

cents. 

 

 Closed :)

 

 "Unfortunately, no one can be told what the Matrix is. 

 You have to see it for yourself."

                                          -[Morpheus]-

 

 


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