Re: FLASH: Movie Critique Request

[Marc Hoffman, Poison Dart Frog Media]

At 10:35 AM 6/18/99 -0400, you wrote:

>my flash debut

>is located at the following address:

>

>http://www.rosetree.k12.pa.us/global/index.html

>

Hi Keane,


I would make the floating text a lighter blue -- it needs more contast for

readability, especially on darker monitors.


You can use <center> and </center> codes around the aftershock code to

center the movie horizontally.


Also, add a couple of <p>s at the top to create a bit of a margin. Or set

height=100%  width=100% in both the object and embed codes, to make this

scale to the full browser window.


I agree with previous comments that it would be nice to see the globe a bit

longer. you can do this by adding empty frames between where your If Frame

Is Loaded occurs and the frame where it loops back to If Frame Is Loaded.



Marc Hoffman

marcdartfrogmedia [dot] com (mailto:marcdartfrogmedia [dot] com)

Flash3 Portfolio: <http://www.dartfrogmedia.com/sampler>, featured 

in Flash 3 Web Animation, by Ken Milburn.


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