Re: FLASH: Animated flash film - your comments please/Jefferis

[Chris de Deugd]

Hi Jefferis,


The ostriches are outlines based on photographs. I understand it went to

quickly, could you give me your specifications - I am trying to find the

balance for the pace.

Good point about the intro - I'll do that !


Thanks, Chris


Jefferis wrote:


>  Really nice Ostrich motion... did you get that from a film and do an

> outline rendering?

>

> A couple of places it moved too fast and I couldn't absorb the text.

>

> Also, and intro telling the viewer what they are about to see would help

> set the context... otherwise you're reading about 4 lines before you

> realize you are in a poem.

>

> Jeff

> >I am working on a small flash film that is based on a poem by Shelley,

> >and I would like some reactions. It's not completely finished and

> >there's no sound yet.

> >Please fill me in on any flaws, whether it's too fast or too slow - if

> >it's readable.

> >

> >Thanks,

> >

> >Chris

> >

> >http://www.xs4all.nl/~aria/pages/love.html

>




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