FLASH: Please give me feedback on a site intro

[Sarah Lamont]

hi everyone,

Could you please give me any sort of critiques on an intro to a site I

did? The url is:

www.2mtc.com/sarah/peak/

I would say it still needs refined, and I'd like to know what areas to

concentrate on. It's for a company called Peak Performance, and I

connected the intro to the actual site, so that you could also see if

you thought it went along with the site well, but there still may be a

password on the site, so if there is, then just forget about that part.

If not, then let me know if it flows into the site well too.

Thanks for any input!

:]

�arah

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