FLASH: re:Site check: http://www.pgeb.com/erica.htm

[Gahlord Dewald]

Very beautiful work. A few comments though:


The intro is very long. It has me reaching for the skip intro button (which

isn't there). It's gorgeous but how about going for something perhaps a

little shorter or making some of your moves a little faster (your name, for

example, is a long name and I'm done reading your name before the animation

is complete which somehow annoys the hell out of me).


Overall the animation was very smooth and graceful. I also like the music,

I'm not certain if it is entirely appropriate. But it's pretty.


I'd like to see a little more of a marketing hook on it though. When I get

through the long animation I have no content on screen, only

navigation/interface. Tell me why I'm there so I know whether I want to

explore more or if I accidentally landed there by mistake.


Overall:

Gorgeous. But respect the user's time. Then again, my own site doesn't say

much/anything about purpose so maybe I'm just a hypocrit. Or an ipocrit.


G



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