Re: site check/suggestions?

[Andrew Ayres]

Hi Naoki,


Great. It ran very smoothly on my 233Mhz PC/WinNT/ISDN, connecting from

Italy. I love the filmic style, with different shots, and lots of action. I

especially liked the car's headlights and sex slave running against the

night sky.


My only suggestion would be to incorporate the "see it again" and "back"

links into the animation itself, rather than have them as text links.


Andrew


At 01:52 AM 5/25/98 -0700, you wrote:

>Hello,

>I recently finished my first Flash animation called Sex Slave Rebels,

>and I am interested in any feedback or suggestions that you may have.

>Especially on how I can polish the piece up.

>http://www.geocities.com/SoHo/coffeehouse/2917

>(scroll past Bobo the cat.)

>Thanks!

>naoki



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