FLASH: (Sometimes Controversial) site check

[AndrewScratch]

Damn, sometimes I hit that send button before thinking.

Here is the URL:


http://198.250.176.230/development/frontpage.html

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hello all,


I'm about to go live with my first professional Flash (front end) site in 

t-minus 4 days. Any constructive comments about the design, layout, or 

opinion on the portrayal of the key messages will be very much appreciated.

I'm trying to tally the strengths and weaknesses of my personal design 

skills, as well as get a grasp (particularly from non-military people) on the 

effectiveness of the way the message is presented. The task assigned to me 

was to try to get the attention of young service members in particular. 

The content is almost complete. I lack only about 3 - 5 documents, a little 

wordsmithing, and the dynamic information is a little behind...but the site 

for all intents and purposes is complete.


You professional opinions will be appreciated (my own skills will benefit 

greatly from it)


Andrew 


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