Re: FLASH: Please review...

[Marc Hoffman]

At 01:03 PM 11/4/98 -0700, you wrote:

>a Generator site alpha at:

>http://www.coloradoavalanche.com

>and let me know what you think. Thanks!

>

>--matt


Some of the buttons were hard to read on my monitor (which admittedly is on

the dark side) -- black text on dark blue on a black background is not

enough contrast.  May I also suggest you try hand-drawing or hand-tracing

the mascot -- I'm guessing this was an autotrace by Flash.  You can get

probably better results using your eye to decide how to simplify the forms,

trace them, and add fills.  Same for some of the other drawings; they could

be simpler, more dramatic, and would tween faster.  Navigation was fine.

One of the players' names brought up an error code instead of a bio (sorry,

I didn't notice which one).  I like the hockey game, but to my

disappointment it wasn't Flash :-(  Where's the Generator used?



Marc Hoffman

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