Re: FLASH: requesting your valued opinions

[Aaron Cushing]

Hi Eric. Your site is off to a great start. I did run into a couple of

things worth looking into though. Your little intro "loading mission,

proceed" sequence spun across my screen WAY too fast for me to really absorb

what was going on. If you could slow that down, great. I had a little

problem recognizing your space ship as such. Maybe a little more detail in

its design would clarify the issue. My biggest turn-off was your choice of

colors (sorry). The "tommy-knocker green" just does NOT do it for me. I also

had a little trouble reading your text over the transparent green box; I'd

try to get better contrast between text and ground if you could.

Your design seems somewhat cluttered and unrefined to me (maybe a different

font?). To really "professionalize", try for more simple and

straightforward. Gradient balls were a fabulous thing in FutureSplash and

Flash 2; now they're getting kinda old. Also, try to avoid using other

people's stuff--like that starfield background.

What I DID really like, was on your buttons, where the green lines follow

the cursor; VERY nice. And I really like how when I exit your site, the ship

flies away, then flies ONTO the HTML page that I came from originally. Nice

touch.


Aaron


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   Aaron Cushing         Multimedia Developer

   Crescent Studios     We Deliver!

   http://www.c-studios.com

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-----Original Message-----

From:

DCDNETDSGNaol [dot] com

>Hey flashers,

>      First of all I would like to thank everyone's help and info which

helped

>me to complete my first flash web site.  Iam new to flash and you have been

>immensely helpful. My flash site is up and running and I would just like

>everyone to check it out and let me know what they think. Also I want to

know

>if you think my concept is OK for a web design business(in other words does

is

>it businesslike enough?). All comments are welcome and wanted.

>

>Dirt Cheap Designs

>http://www.dcd.nu

>

>Thanks

>Eric Cole



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