Re: FLASH: Please critique

[sharon almeida]

Justin,


I have an idea...


I think you can make the concept work by using a text narrative or another method that sets up your scenario. You can even keep with the

sci-fi theme by having typed text pop across the screen in on OCR type font. You can even reinforce the typed effect with sound effects.


Lots of movies and TV shows use this method to establish a scenario, it may help establish your story line.


By the way, neat graphics!

Sharon




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From: Justin <northstar2earthlink [dot] net>

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To: flasherchinwag [dot] com

>Subject: Re: FLASH: Please critique

>Date: Wed, Oct 20, 1999, 3:08 PM

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>    The initial idea was to create an environment to present my portfolio in a

>entertaining and creative way rather than the traditional plain 2D design. My main

>fear when developing this sight was that the audience would not understand the

>story line: Fictional character (me) being abducted for his creative mind and his

>brain extracted and added to a neural network of brains called the OrganiCore. My

>portfolio content comes from the brain on the table and will be displayed in the

>circle.

>    I guess the use of a little imagination and creativity is not allowed and not

>suitable for adults.

>

>"David A. Muszynski" wrote:

>

>> I guess I shouldn't say design.  (actually, I'm impressed with the design as I

>> couldn't do something like that myself) I really mean concept.  "Ohh, he's

>> cuttin' some guys brain out ... cool"  And, that's not really to say that all

>> 13 year olds are immature either. I never said that.

>>

>> Justin wrote:

>>

>> > It would be help full if you could give a more detailed reason why you think

>> > the design is immature.

>> >

>> > "David A. Muszynski" wrote:

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>> > > I hope you're catering to 13 year old boys.  They're the only ones who'll

>> > > be impressed with the design.

>> > >

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