RE: FLASH: What's Your Opinion...

[Lee Hunter]

The Flash stuff is basic and worked fine but I couldn't understand why it

would need such a long preloader.


The text really cries out for the hand of a competent editor. There were a

few spelling blips, some grammatical problems (eg. referring to yourself as

both 'he' and 'I' in the same sentence.) and was generally much too wordy.


It was very odd to see "Portfolio of kevingrunert" almost butting against a

large kevingrunert logo and then have kevingrunert appear yet again in the

first sentence of the text. Its a bit of a turn-off to see a name plastered

everywhere - makes it look like an ego trip more than a professional

company.


Less would definitely be more.


Regards


Lee

www.hum.com


> -----Original Message-----

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ld like to get your opinion on a flash web site that I

> have developed.

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