Re: FLASH: site check please: www.garda.ch

[nadia]

hi geo

i do apreciate your critiques - but i don't quite understand what you're

triing to say...

maybee you would like to tell me in other words...?

and by the way this is not my portfolio as my name is nadia and not garda...


bye


nadia


postmaster12.10.2000 19:24

Uhrpostmasterelektonika [dot] co [dot] uk

> Hi - like the use of sound - brings the artwork to light!

> However you need to seriously sort out your general design - although only

> small the interface moves all over the place in a way which seems thought

> afterwards?

> Perhaps you need to asses and criticise how the layout could be more

> consistent - if you want movement perhaps somehow relational to the

content.

> Also sorten or dense your cv - it's too epic - showing only your best and

> applicable work would make it lokk better.

> Plaese e-mail if you want more help!

>

> Geo


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