Re: FLASH: Site check:http://www.dentalportal.com/flash/tmj.html

[Karin Merx & Harry Druijf]

On 3 Jan 00, at 15:11, Laurence I. Barsh, DMD wrote:


> As couple of people asked to see this project when it was completed.

> (There still may be some typos) I would appreciate any comments for

> improvement

> 

> http://www.dentalportal.com/flash/tmj.html

> 

> Thanks

> Larry


Hi Larry,


I visited your site and here are a few comments, When opening there 

are the buttons and the text 'click on etc.' Maby it is more clear 

when you put 'start' next to the start button.  


The colour of the type does not correspond with the illustrations. I 

think it coult give a bit mor harmonie if you take a colour that fits 

the illustration, like the soft yellow tint in the face. That goos 

for the other type also, the blue italic and the yellow.

If you can figuer this out you can get a nicer balance and it is 

nicer to read, special when it has a lot of technical text.


The hand that comes pointing to the face, it takes a long time and 

the illustration is completly different than the illustration of the 

head. You could try drawing in the same style.


The hard green colour in the buttons, well you probaly know what I 

want to say.....Try to look for a balance, find out where you need 

contast, what's important and needs to be seen.


Hope this helps you, not offend you.


regards

Karin



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