RE: FLASH: Site check:http://www.dentalportal.com/flash/tmj.html

[Laurence I. Barsh, DMD]

No offense, thanks for the help. and thanks to everyone else at the list.


Still learning


Larry


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|Merx & Harry Druijf

|Sent: Tuesday, January 04, 2000 12:28 PM

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|Subject: Re: FLASH: Site

|check:http://www.dentalportal.com/flash/tmj.html

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|On 3 Jan 00, at 15:11, Laurence I. Barsh, DMD wrote:

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|> As couple of people asked to see this project when it was completed.

|> (There still may be some typos) I would appreciate any comments for

|> improvement

|> 

|> http://www.dentalportal.com/flash/tmj.html

|> 

|> Thanks

|> Larry

|

|Hi Larry,

|

|I visited your site and here are a few comments, When opening there 

|are the buttons and the text 'click on etc.' Maby it is more clear 

|when you put 'start' next to the start button.  

|

|The colour of the type does not correspond with the illustrations. I 

|think it coult give a bit mor harmonie if you take a colour that fits 

|the illustration, like the soft yellow tint in the face. That goos 

|for the other type also, the blue italic and the yellow.

|If you can figuer this out you can get a nicer balance and it is 

|nicer to read, special when it has a lot of technical text.

|

|The hand that comes pointing to the face, it takes a long time and 

|the illustration is completly different than the illustration of the 

|head. You could try drawing in the same style.

|

|The hard green colour in the buttons, well you probaly know what I 

|want to say.....Try to look for a balance, find out where you need 

|contast, what's important and needs to be seen.

|

|Hope this helps you, not offend you.

|

|regards

|Karin

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