Re: FLASH: site check (flash 3 - sigh).

[penn stevens]

Thanks to Marc and Larry for your help. Your encouragement really helps.

I guess I may have to lose the blur if it makes things too slow,  and come

up with something else, but I'll have a play around with it. And yeah, I'd

better redo the roundrects in flash. I knew they were untidy. I just wasn't

sure how to make them right, but I expect I'll get it.


cheers,


penn.


>>hello flashers,

>>

>>I wonder if you could take a look at this site I've put together for some

>>friends.

>>http://www.pennpixels.demon.co.uk/test/netro42.html

>>

>>I'm trying to build up a flash portfolio and this is the first practical

>>piece, so I'd appreciate any feedback. I know it still needs tidying up a

>>bit.

>

>Hi Penn,

>

>It runs fine on my pokey P166. I like the design and the timing of the

>piece.  Also the color scheme.

>

>Some suggestions:

>

>In the mouseover animations, put a Stop in the last frame of the animation,

>so it vibrates once and then settles down. Sometimes less is more :-)

>

>Don't know why your rounded rectangles are so jagged on the "rounded"

>parts. If intentional, I don't think it's effective. Did you draw them in

>Flash?

>

>I would not have the right-hand (detail) text sink into place on

>mouseclick. Just have it appear. It's a bit choppy when you animate that

>much text at once, so the effect isn't great.


>

>

>Marc Hoffman





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