RE: FLASH: site check (finally)

[Maraya Cornell]

Wow-a lot is going on! I think your basic design is very nice and clean, and

your choice of colors is appealing.  But there is way too much animation for

a resume. It's hard to read the text with boxes whirling and balls bouncing

everywhere. It would be much more impressive if you simplified it - just a

very short, subtle animation at the beginning of each section. I did like

the multiple copies of fuzzy text hovering and finally aligning themselves

to be readable, but I think that could be shortened and simplified also. The

first page should load more quickly. It isn't clear that when you click

Resume, below, you're going to have to watch the initial animation over

again. Maybe you could call it Introduction or something. Rotating text is

getting kind of tiring, but maybe that's just from the perspective of

someone who looks at too many Flash movies. If you add music, find something

that's not too overwhelming. And don't forget the Stop Music button!


Also, the n in 'position' is missing from your objectives page.


Really good for your first project!


--Maraya


-----Original Message-----

From:	Alice D. [

aliceriverscape [dot] com (mailto:aliceriverscape [dot] com)

]

Sent:	Tuesday, November 10, 1998 11:29 AM

To:

flashershocker [dot] com

Subject:	FLASH: site check (finally)


Hello all,


Finally, my first big(er) movie is completed.  If you find the time

please check out

http://www.svcc.edu/~drobnaa/resume/

and click on the first link.


No sounds yet. Still working on it :)

Thank you for all you help!


Alice D.



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