FLASH: Please please- give me constructive criticism

[Sarah Lamont]

First of all, thanks to everyone for their sites. :)

I need to ask a big favor from anyone - will you please take a look at this flash animation I've been working on? it's not complete - there is going to be a voice over added. But on what is done so far, can anyone give me some constructive criticism (and it's supposed to be Pittsburgh, going to the Point - for anyone not familiar with it.) It is very simplistic, but I am concerned that it at least give the feel of driving through the city, with movement and perspective, if you know what I mean.

Anyways even if you tear it apart, any critiques are welcome. This is my first animation that is actually for something so I understand that it is not the same calibur that a lot of the other members of the flash list have -- but I'm trying! : )

Thank you sooooooooo much for any input.
(The URL is www.2mtc.com/animation/splash.swf)
(It's kind of big so it might take a while to load)
Sarah
 
 
 

David wrote:

Check out
http://juxtinteractive.com/namb/nehemiah/

> heres the URL for a design company.  Godd example of ose of sound and the
> use of Diredtor etc, etc.
>
> http://www.matinee.co.uk/
>
> Enjoy,
>
> Dan.
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: ownerchinwag [dot] com [ownerchinwag [dot] com (mailto:ownerchinwag [dot] com)]On Behalf Of Sarah
> > Lamont
> > Sent: Tuesday, October 12, 1999 3:26 PM
> > To: flasherchinwag [dot] com
> > Subject: FLASH: Flash: Cool sites?
> >
> >
> > I was just wondering if anyone knew of some good ecclectic web sites;
> > some fun ones targeting a young audience, not really modern-artsy
> > though. I don't know how to explain it but I need some inspiration
> > -fast- for a new site I am doing. Thanks!
> > Sarah
> >

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