Re: FLASH: Please please- give me constructive criticism

[Justin]

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Sarah Lamont wrote:


> First of all, thanks to everyone for their sites. :)

>

> I need to ask a big favor from anyone - will you please take a look at

> this flash animation I've been working on? it's not complete - there

> is going to be a voice over added. But on what is done so far, can

> anyone give me some constructive criticism (and it's supposed to be

> Pittsburgh, going to the Point - for anyone not familiar with it.) It

> is very simplistic, but I am concerned that it at least give the feel

> of driving through the city, with movement and perspective, if you

> know what I mean.

>

> Anyways even if you tear it apart, any critiques are welcome. This is

> my first animation that is actually for something so I understand that

> it is not the same calibur that a lot of the other members of the

> flash list have -- but I'm trying! : )

>

> Thank you sooooooooo much for any input.

> (The URL is www.2mtc.com/animation/splash.swf)

> (It's kind of big so it might take a while to load)

> Sarah

>

>

>

>

> David wrote:

>

>> Check out

>> http://juxtinteractive.com/namb/nehemiah/

>>

>> > heres the URL for a design company.  Godd example of ose of sound

>> and the

>> > use of Diredtor etc, etc.

>> >

>> > http://www.matinee.co.uk/

>> >

>> > Enjoy,

>> >

>> > Dan.

>> > > -----Original Message-----

>

> > > From: ownerchinwag [dot] com [ownerchinwag [dot] com]On">mailto:ownerchinwag [dot] com]On Behalf Of

>> Sarah

>> > > Lamont

>> > > Sent: Tuesday, October 12, 1999 3:26 PM

>

> > > To: flasherchinwag [dot] com

>> > > Subject: FLASH: Flash: Cool sites?

>> > >

>> > >

>> > > I was just wondering if anyone knew of some good ecclectic web

>> sites;

>> > > some fun ones targeting a young audience, not really

>> modern-artsy

>> > > though. I don't know how to explain it but I need some

>> inspiration

>> > > -fast- for a new site I am doing. Thanks!

>> > > Sarah

>> > >

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