Re: FLASH: What's Your Opinion...

[sharon almeida]

Hi Kevin,


I like the look of your site, very clean and straightforward. I do agree with the others, though,  that the use of your name is overkill. I

also think that you really don't need to have the word "Professional" in your title. I think "Internet Designer" is fine. It seems a little

out of place and redundant. For example, it would look odd to me to see "Professional Receptionist" or "Professional Programmer".


I would also explore using rollovers or some kind of visual cue when visitors mouse over your navigation graphic. If the pointer doesn't

change or the graphic stays the same, your visitors may not know to click there.


Two final things -- check over your text for capitalization errors and inconsistencies, and experiment with the moving graphics so they are

not so close to your name. It seems kind of crowded.


I think you are headed in the right direction. But to win over potential clients, you need some fine tuning.


Good Luck!

Sharon





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From: kevinhello [dot] net [dot] au

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To: flashmacromediaonelist [dot] com

>Subject: FLASH: What's Your Opinion...

>Date: Sun, Oct 24, 1999, 8:45 AM

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>Hi,

>   I would like to get your opinion on a flash web site that I have developed.

>The address is http://www.kevingrunert.cjb.net

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>Cheers,

>

>Kevin

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