uk-netmarketing Archive (2011-2015)

Hi Paul,

 

Just had a quick look and I like the site a lot - it's visually engaging and
easy to use.

 

Just two minor comments. The main Headline includes 'Organisation and
Promotion' which are hidden verbs. They might be more effective as
imperatives - Organise and Promote - this also avoids the repetition of
'tion' and shortens the words too.

 

Your social media links are tucked away in the footer. Tricky to find
somewhere for them higher up the page but I guess they'd attract more
attention there.

 

Hope those itsy bits help and best of luck.

 

Kind Regards,

 

Paul 

Paul Lock

01453 760271

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From: uk-netmarketing-bounces at mm.chinwag.com
[mailto:uk-netmarketing-bounces at mm.chinwag.com] On Behalf Of Paul Smith (&)
smithandsaunders.com
Sent: 08 February 2012 16:15
To: 'uk-netmarketing'
Subject: [uk-netmarketing] Chinwaggers - feedback on our community based
platform?

 

Hello Chinwaggers - after so many, many, many years of building online web
businesses for others we thought it was time to build our own and give
something back to the community - no, we're not planning to live on fresh
air but the core part of the site is free.

 

It's called Eventility - you can organise your Club, group or Community and
events on it - no charge.

 

We have just added a ticketing system into our baby I'd love to get feedback
from anyone in the creative community who has any energy left at the end of
the day to go and have a peak at on our site and give us some feedback.

 

Thanks in advance, and hope to see you all during SMWL !

 

Oh, and if anyone is from around Cambridgeshire area on the Chinwag list do
join us at @camcreatives  For the last 3 years I've been organising a free
creative social once a month in Cambridge!

 

Cheers,

 

Paul J

 

Paul Smith

Marketing & Communities

 

Eventility - Organisation and promotion made easy.

 

P: 0871 5989859

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E: paul at eventility.co.uk

 

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