Re: FLASH: Site Check Ittner

[Craig Walker]

Loaded fast, everything seems to work correctly.  PII 400, WIN2K, IE5, cable

modem.


I have a few other comments if your interested..


- I think the whole movie needs a border (like in version 1.1), it seems to

hold the design together a little better.

- space the P and the H out a little so that when I roll over the P the pop

out menu doesn't touch the circle around the H

-when the navigation has sub sections, like the portfolio, the sub section

need some sort of indication  that they can be clicked (maybe a underline

when rolled over)

-the timeline on the meseum looks like an interesting graphic, but the

quality is set too low.  I would suggest letting the user click the graphic

for a pop-up window that has a high quality jpg in it.  Also, the graphics

of the buildings on the right hand side also look interesting, but are too

small to tell what they are.  Maybe if you click on them, you could link the

the portfolio section where you have a higher quality version of them.

Just a thought.

-the address on the bottom of the screen is spaced out to much and is to far

away from the rest of the movie.  I would tighten it and move it up.  If

your worried about it interfering with the section title animation, then

maybe try moving it to the left as well?

-the back and next buttons have a sounds attached to them, maybe have the

same sound on the main navigation?


Wow, that turned out to be more then a few.  Don't get me wrong, its a nice

looking site, these are nit picky things.  Hope it helps, good luck.



Craig.

www.nolandinsight.com









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