Critique

[Jeff Haff]

	I'm new to using Flash and I'd like people to check out my first two

creations and give me some feedback on them.

	The first one is a simple animation with moving text and a sound clip at

the end.  I'd like to find out if it looks OK at other screen resolutions

besides the one I'm using (800x600).  The first 3 parts of it are text

coming in from the sides and exiting the other side.  I want to make sure

they don't enter the screen before the other one has left and that they

exit all the way off the screen.  I had a problem with both of those

happening on my first versions, but I think I have it fixed now.

	The other one is another simple animation where five small images drop in

from the top.  I haven't had any problems with that one that I know of.

	The URL for the main page of my site is below in my signature.  From there

you can select the Flash intro to see the first animation and after that

one is done it should automatically take you to the page with the second

animation on it.  Any comments or suggestions on either animation would be

appreciated.  Thanks.




Jeff Haff

jeffbrightok [dot] net

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