Re: UKNM: Spilling

[Tim Ireland]

> << "Your about to enter our secure shopping area. Click here to procede."

>

>  I think I'll take my credit card details elsewhere, thanks....

>

>  <swift exit>

>

>  Tim Ireland >>

> there website needs to look after it's customers more better (sic, sorry,

> sick)

>

> I wonder how many web designers/coders think that Tim's example

illustrates

> the correct use of 'your'.  Those of you who employ them or work with

them,

> dare you test it out?

>

> Michael


You're kidding, right? There are paid 'copywriters' who are challenged by

this kind of thing.


Two page spread in national magazine reads (for the third week running):

"...with a client list that reads like a whose who of Hollywood."


There's also the small matter of rogue apostrophe's.


;o)


Tim Ireland

Director of Marketing

www.designercity.com


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