FLASH: pretty please, critique

[Sarah Lamont]

> Hey Everyone---

Could you please spare a minute or two and look at the animation I did?

I did post it to the list a couple weeks ago, but have revised it since

then. I really need input on the perspective in the drive through, please...:]

And also, I know the talking bubbles look cheesy, they are serving

as placeholders for real voices. I am waiting for our microphone to be

fixed so I can put them together, along with a voice-over for the drive

through. Once that gets in , the whole thing will make more sense. But

the main thing I need help with now is just the visuals, so if anyone has

any feedback, please help me! :]

It takes about a minute or 2 to load, just so you know.

Thanks ever so much!

The URL is www.2mtc.com/animation/

:]

Sarah